you capture my mood


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you capture my mood

you capture my sun

so sorrow surrenders another day

dissipating droplets from finger-limbs

 

the rails will rust through another rain

and tears will wash away in the torrent

as you capture my breath

as you capture my wish

and I like these seasons

am renewed once again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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About thelostkerryman

Thelostkerryman is an author, and entrepreneur- this side of Tir Na N'Og- living in the forests of a consistently confused country. Here in this hill country, hurling doesn't usually involve a hurley, store-made soda bread resembles an inedible Irish megalith, and Kerrygold is only found hidden like a luck penny in the belly of Kroger. His blogs are an account of his adventures, thoughts, eclectic -and eccentric- ramblings, random or insightful poetry, humor and non-humor, pictures (photos), video, essays, fiction, poetic fiction, nonfiction, drama, and writing he has not classified in the description above. All of his posts from thelostkerryman.wordpress.com, talesinastrangerstrangerland@wordpress.com, everydayasadisciple@wordpress.com, and mrandmrsboring.wordpress.com are copywrited according to international copywrite law.
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2 Responses to you capture my mood

  1. reocochran says:

    Sometimes my mood is reflected in the seasons but usually the seasons affect my moods. If this makes sense. . . 🙂 Have a lovely weekend!

    • I tried to write something in a way that looked at an issue in a different way. Apparently, it appears that more than a few people did not understand this poem. The “you” in the poem is “God.” God “captures”- my mood whenever I look at things and see sadness, or when it seems everything appears to be “wintry” in life. God captures it and replaces it with “my sun” so that I see “sunniness” rather than “wintriness.” It is a matter of looking at it through God’s perspective, rather than mine. “I like the seasons am renewed once again” is the concept of repentence, forgiveness, and restoration.

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