you capture my mood
you capture my sun
so sorrow surrenders another day
dissipating droplets from finger-limbs
the rails will rust through another rain
and tears will wash away in the torrent
as you capture my breath
as you capture my wish
and I like these seasons
am renewed once again.
2 responses to “you capture my mood”
Sometimes my mood is reflected in the seasons but usually the seasons affect my moods. If this makes sense. . . 🙂 Have a lovely weekend!
I tried to write something in a way that looked at an issue in a different way. Apparently, it appears that more than a few people did not understand this poem. The “you” in the poem is “God.” God “captures”- my mood whenever I look at things and see sadness, or when it seems everything appears to be “wintry” in life. God captures it and replaces it with “my sun” so that I see “sunniness” rather than “wintriness.” It is a matter of looking at it through God’s perspective, rather than mine. “I like the seasons am renewed once again” is the concept of repentence, forgiveness, and restoration.